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Post by chase on Aug 27, 2012 17:00:28 GMT -5
Chase cautiously enters the den and sets the pups down next to the she-wolf. He then takes up a submissive posture.
(might help to describe that posture. We're all writers here and bigger entries are more fun to read.)-Revera
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Post by lunari on Aug 28, 2012 16:55:34 GMT -5
Lunari entered the den with Moona. She takes Her pups from the srange she-wolf's side and begins to lick them comfortingly.
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Post by Revera on Aug 28, 2012 17:53:03 GMT -5
(Descriptions please. These filler messages are annoying)
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Post by glitter/miranda on Aug 28, 2012 19:10:41 GMT -5
(still have premission to god amaris) Amaris looks at the strange new pups and thinks aloud I wonder whose pups they are their very beautiful
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Post by lunari on Aug 29, 2012 14:29:30 GMT -5
Lunari felt herself blush at the complement. They're mine. Now I think introductions are in order. My name is Lunari, I'm Alpha female of the Mountain Valley Pack. She dips her head to the wolves around her.
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Post by chase on Aug 29, 2012 14:31:55 GMT -5
Remaining in his submissive posture he introduces himself. I am Storm Chaser but everybody can call me Chase.
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Post by Ghost Nightshade on Aug 29, 2012 15:18:34 GMT -5
Nightshade gently places Shadow on the ground, worry and concern settle in her eyes MIRANDA! Miranda I need you now!
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Post by sacredwolf101 on Aug 29, 2012 15:22:40 GMT -5
(godding) Misty looks up at Nightshade. Miranda's in the Falls Den. Remebering all the prey that they had left out at the Ravine she quickly gets up. I gotta go, she's expecting me to bring back the prey. She dips her head before leaving the den.
(transition to Ravine)
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Post by chase on Aug 29, 2012 15:24:03 GMT -5
Chase looks at the she-wolf then at the bleeding pup. Do you want me to help? He asks with concern.
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Post by Ghost Nightshade on Aug 29, 2012 15:24:13 GMT -5
Nightshade nods, picks up Shadow carefully and darts to the Falls Den
(transition Falls Den)
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Post by glitter/miranda on Aug 29, 2012 16:13:52 GMT -5
(godding) Amaris replies nice to meet you Lunari
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Post by ienzodarkness on Aug 31, 2012 3:42:30 GMT -5
Luna trots slowly into this new den Lykaios and Shadow had just gone into. Lykaios had just rushed out of the den with Shadow,but Luna was much too exhausted to follow them. Letting out a low sigh,the pup collapsed near the entrance of this strange den,sniffing her surroundings. She looked warily around her,and saw very young pups,and smiled weakly. They were so adorable. The black pup began licking her paws slowly,her eyes still watching the pups.
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Post by Revera on Aug 31, 2012 7:56:25 GMT -5
(Just popping in for a little more praise. Ive been watching the progressions of all your characters and I must say Luna sticks out the most. Her use of the written word captivates me and her character in itself is so believable. Everyone deserves a pat on the back now and then and this was Lunas turn. Good job girl )
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Post by ienzodarkness on Aug 31, 2012 8:05:07 GMT -5
(Aww,thank you Revvy. I didn't know Luna was that good. And I can't believe she's believeable. I won't let you down at all with her)
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Post by ladywolf on Aug 31, 2012 8:29:35 GMT -5
(That's my girl)
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